Hmm. I am curious to see where you'll go with this - and I am looking forward to it as well! I like the way that you've created the prologue here - you've created both the background elements of your story and a bit of tension for what is going to come.
Thank you for writing and for sharing - I hope that you decide to continue this story. So, best of luck and take care!
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Date: 2006-12-22 04:28 am (UTC)Thank you for writing and for sharing - I hope that you decide to continue this story. So, best of luck and take care!