Fanfic: Uchiha Senbeiya Prologue

[dazeyhaze]

Fandom: Naruto

Title:  Uchiha Senbeiya
Rating: PG-13
Genre: General
Pairing: SasuxNaruxSasu, ItaxNaru, ItaxNaruxSasu
Summary:  Itachi found something more worthwhile to do than just testing his capacity. Sasuke, on the other hand, has an obsession far greater than avenging his clan. As for Naruto, well, he just wants a bed of his own. Too bad neither of the Uchiha brothers are all that willing to comply.

Warnings: There may also be a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. Story is unbeta-ed.
Disclaimer: Naruto does not belong to me. No copyright infringement is intended. 

  

AN: This is basically another Naruto is adopted by an Uchiha story. Teyaki and Uruchi are actually Naruto characters. They were the ones that talked to the young Sasuke on his way home and asked him about school in the flash back during the big fight between Sasuke and Naruto. I’m not sure if they are or were shinobis but Teyaki is the owner of the Uchiha sweet rice crackers shop (Uchiha Senbeiya). Teyaki is also Fugaku’s older brother, making him Itachi’s and Sasuke’s uncle. I doubt they’re Obito’s parents but for the sake of this story I’m going to be taking some liberties and say that they are. Also for the sake of this story I’m also going to say that both Teyaki and his wife are retired shinobi, even though I think they are probably just civilians.

 

For anyone who's interested I’m still working on the second chapter of the ‘The Greatest Enemy’ but am having quite some trouble starting. Please bear with me on that one. I’m working on it >_<.

 

 

Prologue

 

With gentle eyes Teyaki stared down at the sleeping infant. With wild blonde hair and bright blue eyes he was the spitting image of his father, the late Yondaime Hokage, a man the whole of Konohagakure would forever be indebted to. A hero the whole village had just wronged for even thinking of demanding the death of his only son. He reached out and touched the three whisker marks that scarred the child’s plump pink cheeks, a troubled frown marring his brows as he stared down at what he saw as the very epitome of innocence. Slowly he lifted his gaze to meet that of his wife, almost afraid to see the same burning hatred mimicked in her eyes as he had seen in that of the villagers. Although he saw none he did see the spark of uncertainty that momentarily flashed within the dark depths of her eyes.

 

For a long while she returned her husband’s stare. She knew it would be so easy to blame this child, just as easily as it would have been to blame the Fourth for her son’s death all those years ago. But no matter how she tried she couldn’t find it in herself to do so. Even till this day the memory of the prideful youth Yondaime had been, kneeled before them with sorrowful blue eyes refusing to meet theirs, so readily prepared to receive the whole weight of the world upon his all too young shoulders, still haunted her. She couldn’t do it then. And she couldn’t do it now. This was a child, an innocent child. He was absolutely no different than her nephew. Her heart ached. He was no different than her son. Her Obito.

 

Whatever initial reservations Uruchi may have had was quickly pushed aside. She wasn’t a fool and unlike so many before her she refused to allow her own grief blind her to the truth that was as clear as day. There was no way Arashi would even think of doing this to his own child if there had been even the slightest chance that the monster could overcome him. She tore her gaze away from her husband and stared down at the tiny form before her. They owed both his parents so much and even if they didn’t, she knew she couldn’t just walk away. Not now. Not ever. To be weighed down by such hatred, subjected to such scorn, his life was going to be hard as it was. He didn’t need the added burden of facing it all alone. She wiped away the wetness that came to her eyes and bending down placed a gentle kiss to the child’s forehead. 

His fears assuaged Teyaki felt his lips tip up ever so slightly at the display, and though in true Uchiha fashion it resembled more of a smirk than a smile it was a smile nonetheless, a true one.

 

Cocking his head to the side he murmured, “Uchiha Kazama Uzumaki Naruto. The kid is definitely going to hate us for that mouthful.”

 

“Well I don’t know about you but I think it’s perfect, just perfect,” she replied gently. “He is our son now after all.”

 

“That he is,” he added before turning to the old man quietly observing the whole thing with what could only be described as obvious relief. “How fast can the adoption papers be drawn and processed?”

 

“In this case I’m sure they could be done as fast as tomorrow morning,” the newly reinstated Hokage answered.

 

Teyaki smirked. “Good.”

 

Sarutobi watched as the ageing woman carefully picked up the still slumbering baby and cradled him within the safety and warmth of her arms. In a loving embrace, a mother’s embrace. His heart warmed at the sight. Although he really didn’t want to he knew he had to ask. It was something the new parents would have to face and he wanted to make sure that they knew exactly what they were doing, what this was going to mean and quite possibly what it might cost them.

 

“Are you sure about this?” he questioned, wishing it was a question he didn’t have to ask.

 

“We are determined to do this Hokage-sama, even if we have to leave the Uchiha clan to do it,” was all the dark haired man said and though he was sure it wouldn’t come to that he was ready for it. “We are going to raise him as our very own.”

 

The resolve in his eyes was enough to silence any doubts Sarutobi may’ve had. He gave the couple a nod and watched as both disappeared in a silent puff of smoke with Yondaime’s legacy and only son. Once alone he walked over to his desk and picked up his still burning pipe. He inhaled deeply, allowing the grey fumes to billow out from his mouth as he released it along with a short sigh. He believed those words. For the first time since the Fourth’s death he allowed himself a small smile. Naruto may not be seen as the hero his father wanted him to be but at least he would be cared for and though things were far from being right for now it was enough, just enough.

Comments

[hitzusin.livejournal.com]

I'm interested to see where this will go. Especially if it's both SasuNaru AND ItaNaru, one of the many other pairings I adore.

[dazeyhaze.livejournal.com]

To be honest I'm not quite sure where I'm going with this but I really do adore the ItaNaru pairing and I've been wanting to write an ItaNaru story for quite a while but I'm still very stuck on SasuNaru. So this is my compromise, a ItaNaruSasu story xD. Hopefully this will turn out okay. Thanks for commenting.

[grimy13.livejournal.com]

OH MY GOD! YOU=LOVE!!!!!!!!!

[dazeyhaze.livejournal.com]

Hee ^_^

[potahari.livejournal.com]

Must. Use. Powers. And. Mem!

[dazeyhaze.livejournal.com]

Thanx for taking the time to read this.

[su24.livejournal.com]

this seems like a good start...i'm intrigue to read more when it comes :D

[dazeyhaze.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I'll to update soon. But please don't hold me to that I don't have a very good track record when it comes to updates >_>

[honeycorrupts.livejournal.com]

Great start! I agree with strawbrrygashs. Will there be itanaru love?

Cocking his head to the side he murmured, “Uchiha Kazama Uzumaki Naruto. The kid is definitely going to hate us for that mouthful.” love this line.

Wonderful job, cant wait for more!

[dazeyhaze.livejournal.com]

Yes, there will be ItaNaru love. And along with SasuNaru love. How I am going to manage that I have no idea. I guess we're just going to have to wait and see.

[calambmity.livejournal.com]

Wow, that's an interesting start
I'm curious to see where this goes
Great job, I love Naruto's looooooooooooooonnnnnnngggggggg name
Long names are great, I love 'um! =^______^=
Knowing Naruto he'll probably get a nickname soon enough, and nicknames are awesome too!
You did a great job, and I can't wait till you update.

♥ calambmity

[dazeyhaze.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I'll try my best to update soon. Honestly I'm not quite sure where I'm going to go with this. So hopefully this doesn't turn into a train wreck.

[calambmity.livejournal.com]

*smiles* Don't sweat it, update when you can, don't wring yourself out over this, it's just nice to see awesome stuff coming from fellow fans.
No, I don't think it will go into a train wreck your SasuNaru guardian angel will be guiding your typing fingers. ^-^

[mija711.livejournal.com]

oooh I am soo intrested in this plot line, so see that someone, especially an Uchiha couple taking in the demon fox vessel and loving it like thier own, awwwwww wonder how Naruto's life will be diffrent from the anime, now that he is being raised by parents who will look after him and love him?? and how will all this effect the relationship between Sasu and Naru, and Itachi Naru??? hmmmmm will have to find out how that turns out, wonder if Itachi still kills his clan and foegets to kill Naru or just figures that Narut was never really clan so doenst waste his time??? anyhow so many question Im sure you will anser as you go, love it and cant wait for more, much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

[dazeyhaze.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you like this so far. I think I've got all that planned, the whole Uchiha massacre incident and all that. I won't take too long to get into it... hopefully. Because I really want to start delving into the relationship between Itachi, Sasuke and Naruto and how that develops, especially now that they are cousins. Anyway thanks again.

[maplepie-tree.livejournal.com]

ooh! ooh! i am positively thrilled to read this! XD i honestly can't wait for more of this fic to come from you :3 i'm sure every bit of it will be just as awesome as the prolouge was~ <3 and can't wait for the itanarusasu lovin' to start

[dazeyhaze.livejournal.com]

Thank you. I'll try my best to get the next chapter out soon. I'm kind of jotting things down in between work for all my WIPs >_>. No time otherwise. Anyway, thanks again. And the ItaNaruSasu loving will start soon

awe

[(Anonymous)]

Awe I really like this so far, it's so nice to come across fics where Naruto is cared for. he truly is a bundle of joy and the only thing he bring to the Uchiha household, is goodness. I'll be keeping my eye out on this one cheers

~ I am the ramenlass~

Re: awe

[dazeyhaze.livejournal.com]

Ditto to that. I LOVE Naruto, absolutely love him. I guess that's why I liek writing fics where he gets all the love the show refuses to give him. Poor Naru-chan. I'm glad you like this and lots of thanks for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated ^^

[ichi-kuro-neko.livejournal.com]

This is cute. I would love to read further and maybe see which relationship develops first.

(roots for Itanaru)

[dazeyhaze.livejournal.com]

Thanks for commenting. I'm currently working on the next part. As for which relationship develops first, I'm not so sure myself >_>

^^

[masterfranny.livejournal.com]

well, that was a really original thing for such over used plot, and that means this fic has great potential.

^^ i want to know what will happen now, and be sure, itanaru is my OTP. ^^ thanks for writing this, i hope you add more soon enough *huggles*

SOY/MF/Ceph

PS= the itanarusasu part freaks me off because i don't like the threesome with both uchihas in it (uchihacest is ugly to me) but it's itanaru. i'll love.

Re: ^^

[dazeyhaze.livejournal.com]

Uchihacest makes me a bit squeamish too. So I very much doubt that there would really be any Itachi on Sasuke action. It would be more like Itachi and Sasuke both trying to get Naruto's attention at the same time and though not liking that the other is there puts up with it anyway. Um, at least that's what I'm planning. Anyway, thanks for commenting. It was very much appreciated.

[penguin88.livejournal.com]

Hmm. I am curious to see where you'll go with this - and I am looking forward to it as well! I like the way that you've created the prologue here - you've created both the background elements of your story and a bit of tension for what is going to come.

Thank you for writing and for sharing - I hope that you decide to continue this story. So, best of luck and take care!

[dazeyhaze.livejournal.com]

Thanks. I really do want to continue with this but I'm experiencing somewhat of a block. With practically everything I'm writing really. I'm still going to try my best to continue this though. Thanks again and sorry for taking so long to reply.

[(Anonymous)]

wow *.*

[dazeyhaze.livejournal.com]

^_^